You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Report research suggests that majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes when they are set free.

What do you think of this case?
What to be done to solve this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.
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Discussion Essay:
Introduction:
General line
Paraphrasing
This essay shall shed light upon the various reasons for the existence of this problem along with some ways to address the issue.
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At least, one paragraph for reasons with example/survey
At least, one paragraph for solutions with example/survey

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Conclusion
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Reasons:
difficulty in finding the employment/people are reluctant to hire them/they are rejected due to a negative perception/so, these people are forced back in the world of crime

habitual criminals/find crimes easier than working any other task/only knows crime
lack of education/poverty or poor financial conditions/company or atmosphere in which they live/when they return back to same place, their mind is converted again to crimes
do not understand the value of crime free life or moral behavior/criminal psychology or mentality/addiction of drugs/

Laws are not strict or not applied well/criminals don’t fear the punishment/
revenge/retaliation/sometimes, they want to settle scores (please don’t make it a main point, just in case, you are lacking in word limit)
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Solutions:
multiple ways/
prepare them for employment while they serve the sentence/it will make them useful for the society and their family/give them an option to stay away from crime
Government can make such establishment where ex-criminals are recruited/aid or funds to start a new business/

Laws must be stringent/criminals must have a fear of punishment
work on the psychology of habitual criminals/treatment of addicts

constant surveillance/ authorities must keep an eye/
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Samples for intro and conclusion:
It is common to see that criminals, once released from prison, have a tendency to indulge in unlawful activities again.
The following essay will discuss in details about the various factors that have caused the situation and some of the ways to address the issue.

To conclude, skeptical behavior of the society, along with lack of employment, is the main reason why past criminals choose the wrong path again.
Preparing them for employable skills during their jail time can change the situation and would give them a chance to start their life on a positive note.
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Repetition of crimes by criminals, who have served the prison, is an alarming concern.
Many social factors are associated with this development however, few positive steps on the part of government can tackle this issue to a large extent.
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In conclusion, it is the society’s reluctance to accept ex-criminals that usually does not allow criminals to live a normal life.
Efforts from governments can help such criminals to stay away from their old and unlawful methods of livelihood.
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some vocab:

criminals/offenders/culprits/law breakers
jail/prison/serve the sentence/prosecuted/
settlement/chance to start a new life/rehabilitation
helping hand/funds/aid/
reluctant/scared/skeptical/uneasy/not prepared
helpless/nowhere to go but the crimes/only option/survival/get an excuse

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