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Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Although there are some who credit success to diligence and perseverance, there are others who find success in money and looks. I personally favor the former perspective: however, my essay shall dwell upon both the viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.
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To start with the first view, why hard work and determination are crucial to achieve goals. In order to do anything worthwhile, an aspirant certainly needs to put his best efforts, that too beyond his comfort zone. For example, Indian cricketer, Virat Kohli, reached the epitome of success, only due to his diligent nature. Along with being industrious, it is also crucial not to lose focus and carry on with zeal. Hence, both hard work and determination play a pivotal role in achieving success.
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In addition to hard work and determination, two more factors money and appearance are also given credit for success. Since the final gauge/measure for success is usually considered money, it is better to have it in the beginning. It is a known fact that in most of the businesses, capital is a prerequisite, as is evident from many big corporates in India like Reliance, Tata and Birla who are rich for generations. If along with good finance, a person possesses the skills to be presentable, the path to success definitely becomes easier. Therefore, good financial background and looks are also of great significance to succeed.
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To my mind, hard work and determination are on a higher pedestal/place. The world is full of examples where people from affluent families and nice looks were not able to get their desired targets. On the other hand, numerous rags to riches stories are also quite popular. Many good actors, singers and sportsmen could not carry their success/fame to their children.
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To conclude, hard work as well as determination can do wonders in any field, though significance of money and look cannot be ignored. However, when compared rationally, persistent diligence always has an upper hand.
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Success is ever elusive and to find exact ingredients is a herculean task. Though many scholars search for this goal in hard work and determination, there are others who find looks and financial background a more suitable choice. Both the views along with my inclination to consistent industrious nature will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
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